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The Story
Through the diner window, Ash watched his bike multiply into waveforms of molten chrome. The peaks and valleys spiked a melody he couldn’t quite place. The simplicity of it told him piano, but it could have just been the juke box at the far end of the diner near the door playing a sad tune he couldn’t quite place, either. Two mysteries, intertwined somehow with the one in his head, with the one somewhere down the highway where families of cacti stood by the road as if waiting for a ride.
“Nice ride,” the waitress said, the two words bisected by a bubble pop.
Ash didn’t look at her, still keen on finding the melody.
“Not as nice as that helmet, though,” she said, followed by a snort, which was enough for him to lose everything again. Or did she lose him?
“Thanks,” Ash said.
The waitress refilled his coffee. “Looks too small for you.”
“It is.”
She pushed a plate of pie to clink against his plate of uneaten strawberry pancakes. “You like cats?”
“Not really.”
“You don’t like to talk much, do you?”
Ash rubbed his eyes and divided the pancake in two, put one half on a napkin, leaving the other on the plate, which he pushed across the table.
“Sorry,” he said. “Why don’t you sit?”
The waitress whose nametag read Mandy blushed. She put her hand to her mouth of plump crimson lips and fanned manicured fingernails shaped to claws. “I-I can’t. I’m still on the clock.”
Ash looked behind him at the empty booths stretching to the door, then at the ones in front of him, deliberately, almost in slow motion, but mostly he watched her cat-eyed eyes watch him.
“I don’t think anyone would mind,” he said. “And I don’t like pancakes.”
“I don’t understand, sir,” she said.
“I don’t either.”
“Sir?”
Ash checked on his bike again in the empty parking lot. Dull, the approaching twilight sucking the color out of it. A sustained note swelled across the headlight, but it wasn’t enough, not that any of it had been enough.
“I’m from Colorado,” he said.
“That’s a long ways away.”
“It is.”
“Why are you so far from home with a helmet that’s too small?”
Ash slammed his hands on the table and laughed. Silverware backflipped and plates gave the same maneuverer a good try. He massaged his eye sockets while the echo of their music played in his head. “Because I like cats, I guess.”
Mandy backed away from the table, scribbling something on her order pad.
“Oh, I don’t want anything else,” he said. “But thank you.”
Her mouth smiled but her eyes didn’t. “Nervous habit.”
“Tell me about it.”
“Sir?”
She was beautiful. “I’d like you to sit across from me and enjoy this half of pancake and the slice of pie you so generously brought over, and tell me about it. This nervous habit of yours.” She was comforting. “And tell me how a lovely woman like yourself finds herself in the middle of the desert working at some lonely diner.”
Mandy stared.
“I’m sorry,” he said. “I do like strawberry pie, though. Thank you.” He cut the end of the slice with his fork, and it broke the the crust cleanly, then the strawberry goo, and finally the strawberries without the rest of it spilling across the plate. He brought the bite to his mouth and chewed, watching his bike outside, the heat waves flatlined.
He sipped his coffee, whose bitterness cut his teeth. He went for his water. The glass was empty. But the seat across from him was not. Mandy sat there with perfect posture. He squared his shoulders and straightened his spine to meet her gaze. She pushed a fresh glass of water to him, the ice cubes caught in a vortex.
Ash reenergized that vortex when he picked up the glass, spying Mandy’s fractured visage through it, and he thought he saw the waveform manifest again.
“I make the pie every morning,” Mandy said. “Come in early, even, before my shift technically starts. I work in the dark so Charlie doesn’t think I’m trying to get overtime.”
“Who’s Charlie?”
“He owns the place. Runs the kitchen.”
“I see.”
“So,” she said glancing at her hands at the table and a napkin she twisted the corner from. “Who’s in Colorado?”
“Who?”
“What, I meant. What.”
“Nothing. No one.”
“Not even a cat?”
Ash grinned and tore the corner off his napkin. “Not anymore.”
“I’m sorry.”
“Why do you say that?”
She shrugged. “I don’t know. Felt right.”
“Do you like music?” he asked.
“I do.”
“What kind?”
The setting sun cast her in strawberry-pancake pink. “Oh, all kinds.”
“Oh.”
“Something wrong?”
“No.”
“All right.”
“You know what?” she said. “I don’t like pancakes either. Especially strawberry ones.”
“I didn’t think you did.”
She looked up at him. “Why’s that?”
“Because I don’t.”
She smiled with lipstick tipped teeth. “Having something in common is a good thing.”
He nodded, then decided to try the pancake. Soggy, syrup already crystalizing. A mouthful of mud and glass.
Mandy’s mouth made the shape of an upside down U, then made wrinkles that cracked the shell of her makeup. “I thought you didn’t like pancakes.”
“I had to try again.”
He swallowed down the rest of the coffee and picked up the helmet, standing. He fished money out of his pocket and put it on the edge of the table. “Thanks again, Mandy.”
“For what?”
“For reminding me I like cats.”
Her laugh was as nervous as her notepad scribbles. “You’re funny.”
“She thought so, too.”
Ash forced the helmet over his head where it smashed his burning ears and vised his skull to play nothing but white noise.
Through the helmet’s visor, Ash watched Mandy swirl with the imperfections in the polycarbonate as she looked at the stupid cat ears atop his helmet. There was no melody, so he got on his bike to look for one.